wakka 222 Report post Posted September 25, 2016 Name: Sophia Raybrandt Character Number: 1 Powers: no Home: A fox hole outside of Knothole Sex: Female Sexual Orientation: Bisexual Species: Fox Age: 18 Height: 3'7 Weight: 52 pounds Physical Description: Sophia has orange and white fur with red hair with sapphire blue eyes and a slender noticeably curvy figure. Attire: she wears a tank top with a light blue scarf around her neck that hangs down behind her with shorts, brown leather travel boots and carry's a brown leather satchel where she carry's her alchemy supplies. She all so carry's with her a silver locket with gold detailing and a heart shaped ruby gem in the center. Skills: Shes a very skilled alchemist able to create both powerful explosive potions as well as healing potions and thanks to her fox like traits she is quick to adapt and agile enough to evade some attacks. very good hearing. Tools/Accessories: She carry's a simple fire stater set. Flint striker and a few combustible materials. A pair of binoculars. A dagger and a variety of potions. Weaknesses: Shes not very strong and and short sighted at times. Character Personality: Kind and sweet, Shy and innocent. Sophia is a girl with a big heart. A strong spirited fox that's strong willed and determined to be one of the best alchemists in the country. Shes some what shy at first but open to making friends with her kind hart and charming smile. *Note* Married fox. Physical Stats: Speed - 7 Agility - 8 Strength - 3 Book Smart - 5 Street Smart - 2 Perception - 5 Charisma - 5 Endurance - 5 Survival - 5 Stealth - 5 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blazeymix 890 Report post Posted September 25, 2016 Your stat points add up to 60, they need to be 50 max. Also, your character is far too light in weight. Flying Squirrel made sense being so light weight but this character being 3'7" they would definitely weigh a good amount, probably around 50 pounds at least. Also potions sound a little too magical. Make sure the potions she makes are made from herbs and other natural resources. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
wakka 222 Report post Posted September 25, 2016 33 minutes ago, Blazeymix said: Your stat points add up to 60, they need to be 50 max. Also, your character is far too light in weight. Flying Squirrel made sense being so light weight but this character being 3'7" they would definitely weigh a good amount, probably around 50 pounds at least. Also potions sound a little too magical. Make sure the potions she makes are made from herbs and other natural resources. Stats and weight fixed. And yes there non magical and made from local ingredients from the forest or any place that is of use. Caves or such. ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blazeymix 890 Report post Posted September 25, 2016 Sounds good, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites